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'What a big...'

What a big dream I had. I was at school and no-one was there. Just me. I was all alone. I took my jersey off – I was Spiderman! I was strong! I made a big web in my classroom and I was upside down. I scared the children and Mrs Russell. Mrs Russell screamed! When I     woke up I was so happy to be Mitchell again. By Mitchell



'It was horrifying'     

So there I was on a cliff with a ten foot drop to certain death.  Suddenly I noticed a rotting platform hanging from some vines and beside it was a raging river.  I took down the rotting platform and laid it on the sloppy mucky ground and sat on it. n I gentlely pushed myself into the brownish water.  I travelled along for about half an hour until I heard a sound.  It was horrifying.  Then I worked out what it was.  It was a waterfall.  I turned around and started paddling the other way but I realised it was too late as I hurtled toward the mucky river below.  When I hit the water I stayed under for a few seconds and then I bobbed up to the surface.  I noticed a dense rainforest around me as I struggled to get to the river bank.  I climbed up to the riverbank and began to wander in.

By Oliver


Wet Weekend

It was raining in the weekend so hard.  I saw a gynormous puddle.  Hannah went for a paddle.  I had bare feet so I went for a paddle too.  It felt freezing on my toes and my toes were like icicles.

By Paris N


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